One's Thoughts Poem by BUCK WILD

One's Thoughts

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My mind is blank as if it were an empty room without light.
My soul is cold as if it were filled with ice from winters night.
My heart is hurt as if it were a bird with broken wings.
My body is tired as if it were suffering from all these things.
So confused, I dont know what to so where does one go,
when body is tired, mind is blank, heart is hurt, and soul is cold.
Eyes are searching for the lies but one cannot see.
Ears are listening to the truth but refuse to believe.
Suddenly, Tha mind is filled with thoughts that flood tha heart with more pain, and tha soul grows even colder in which it leaves tha body drained, and tha eyes let go of tha tears that tha mind tried to detain,
because one's life continues to fall as if it were tha Rain.......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rebekah Arwood 09 December 2008

'One's Thoughts'...an apt title to a skillfully written poem. Well done.

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L0$t 0n3 08 December 2008

i really like this...

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