One Simple Law... Poem by shweta advani

One Simple Law...

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One simple law..
One simple logic..
I am at fault..
If I am tragic..
It's my own actions
that take this form..
I m blessed with rain
or have to face a storm...

But my blinded ego
doesn't get along..
It thinks it can never be wrong..
coz it is so strong...
But it operates out of fear
N I m all love...
When I m there, there is no tear...

Knowingly or unknowingly
thousands of deeds r done...
good or bad, according to them
Life takes a turn...
But if I have to be freed
from the consequences
I wud have to be freed from
the sense of doership..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vinod Ak 14 May 2009

great poem! ! ! heard a saying - Ego = 'Edging 'God 'Out! 10+++

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Kesav Easwaran 10 May 2009

Ego often beats you working inside, you unaware...good poem Shweta...the rain/storm expression reads impressive...10

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