Friday, June 21, 2019

One-Sunny-Afternoon>>> Comments

Rating: ★5.0

oh! hot is breeze on my face
sweat forming on my forehead
cold water is welcome to ease
thirst crawling in my throat
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Manonton Dalan
fish Warmness
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Jennifer Birchall 21 June 2019

Wonderful expression in this poem, beautifully written dear Manonton.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 21 June 2019

The hardships and uneasy feelings caused by them on a sunny afternoon have been marvelously pictured in this equally marvelous poetic expression. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Manonton Dalan

Manonton Dalan

virginia, usa
Manonton Dalan
Manonton Dalan
virginia, usa
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