Only In Dreams Poem by Noemi Lee

Only In Dreams

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Last night I dreamt
You hugged me.
Or was it I
who hugged you?
I don't remember
and it doesnt matter.

I do remember
your arms around my body
and mine around yours-
the tickle of your soul patch
on my neck.

And it was a long hug,
a close hug,
an- I feel your heartbeat hug
an- I-understand-you-so-completely-
we-dont-even-have-to-use-words
hug.

It was a dream hug
and now that I am awake
I know it couldn't get any better
than that.

Because dreams
destroy the barriers
amassed by
an alert mind
upon the opening of
eyelids.

Monday, May 22, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: barriers
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
R H 22 May 2006

A lovely write that explores the joys of the sub-conscious mind - for only in dreams are we truly free..! . nice one Noemi. Kind regards, Justine

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