Only When You Win Poem by Jude Fuhnwi

Only When You Win

Rating: 5.0


This emerging pattern of who you are
May in no time take away your star
It's like we only win when you win
Is it also possible that 'I' win only when we win?

If this too plays that we fail when you win
There is then the truth that your win is failure
What's the point of your win if it cannot lure?

If we do not win when you do not win
Then you are in quest of the wrong win
You just are.
You are not a star!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan E S 12 February 2021

It is quite important for society that moves forward, to make sure that the growth is inclusive. If ‘we' decide to leave ‘you' out, then my growth is not growth at all. Well done, my friend.all the best. Five stars

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