Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 397,847 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Only Woman - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Man finds solace
With so much of happiness
A step in direction
For his life’s action

Had it not been the existence of woman?
We could not have remained human
As most of the time she is around us
With full dedication and trust

I would call her as embodiment of strength
Living with each count of pulses in breath
How can one forget the memory till his death?
The tears rush to eyes while laying the wreath

Sometimes there is creation of bitterness
There is hostile expression on face too
Still room is open for the compromise
As both have committed to keep up the promises

It is often said” there may be some tussle”
It is also possible that it may give rise to some troubles
But overall if you sum up, it is good journey
One feels always happiness without sorry

What will happen if person is left alone?
Some of the brightest moments may be missed or gone
That charm in the birth of child or wedding anniversary
All that is needed, felt inseparable and undoubtedly necessary

One may not prefer to live in isolation
As that amounts to be of no civilization
Country must move and so the population
We are part of the set up and it is provided with indication

Comments about Only Woman by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/27/2013 8:32:00 PM)

    Heather Burns and Busybee Sabeen like this.

    Busybee Sabeen True, so Nobody should be Alone.... Liked it! ~¤
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/27/2013 7:24:00 PM)

    This poem has feeling, depth and beauty. Jim BoswellLess than a minute ago Beautiful metaphors. Deep thoughts and a mystery that holds the reader. As one line says it is a good journey.

    ok Larry StallingsLess than a minute ago ok Comment 0 Inconsistency Grace Oribhabor2 minutes ago It looks like you have some experience writing prose. However, your rhyming is a bit inconsistent. Decide which lines are going to rhyme - like first and third, or second and fourth, or all four. Keep that style through the whole poem.

    ok Larry StallingsLess than a minute ago ok Comment 0 Inconsistency
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/27/2013 7:12:00 PM)

    Man finds solace
    With so much of happiness
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 27, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, September 24, 2013

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