patrick o'shaughnessy

Rookie - 0 Points (09/12/92 / merced california)

Open Heart Surgery - Poem by patrick o'shaughnessy

i sat down at the table
trusting her with my heart
fragile to the touch
it could easily fall apart

she held it in her hands
i waited for her next move
anticipation in her eyes
for what she wanted to do

but she dropped it.......

i dont think she planned it
but it happened in a way
that scarred me on the inside
until this very day


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  • (4/26/2010 10:51:00 AM)


    woahss! !
    i likes this alot! !
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Poem Submitted: Monday, April 26, 2010



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