Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 481,597 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Open Space - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Open space

Beauty lies in places
From where boom all races
Develop their own identity and culture
Make the country a lovely place for smooth breather

Where women move out freely
The behavior from males remain orderly
No violation of modesty is done forcefully
And freedom of movement is enjoyed really

Live by what you see!
Practice compassion through eyes
Shower the love where it is needed
Make presence felt conceded

Beauty can be reflected
When acted with interest
It can be seen with open mind
Something more is to find

So allow the open space
For ladies to race
Towards better places
For development in all the cases

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/5/2015 8:30:00 PM)


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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/5/2015 8:09:00 PM)


    welcome Tarun H. Mehta, Scott Ransopher and Yogendra Pandey like this.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/5/2015 10:12:00 AM)


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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/5/2015 10:06:00 AM)


    So allow the open space
    For ladies to race
    Towards better places
    For development in all the cases
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 5, 2015



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