Origins Poem by Salvatore Ala

Origins

Rating: 5.0


Trees walk out to sea,
Waters encircle them like floating barrels.
Tall mastheads with green sails cross the sun.
Thick lateral roots act as rudders.
The trees plunge in rogue waves
And trim sails, following a tree star.
Barely visible now, cargo birds break free,
Clouds of them on the horizon.
The last tree to cross,
Branches brushing the backs of elephants.

Tuesday, May 29, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: eclectic
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 30 May 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Salvatore. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Salvatore Ala 30 May 2018

Thank you. I will look for your poem Love and. Cheers!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 30 May 2018

Salvatore, another fine poem....10++++

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Salvatore Ala 30 May 2018

Thanks so much!

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Robert Murray Smith 29 May 2018

An imaginative write with good imagery well penned.++10.

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Salvatore Ala 30 May 2018

Thank you Robert! Cheers!

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