Thursday, June 13, 2019

Orphan Comments

Rating: 5.0

A parentless child,
in a wind that is mild

Lying on the bench,
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Uswa Afzal
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Jazib Kamalvi 20 June 2019

such a nice start, Uswa. Read my poem Love and L u s t. Thanks

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Uswa Afzal 21 June 2019

Thank you so much and yes I would love to read your poems too. Stay tuned for more.

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 June 2019

With moist eyes, with a heart that is deprived with constant countenance, with no physical maintenance. very expressive of the pain of the orphan child. great poem. it touched me. tony

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Uswa Afzal 21 June 2019

I am happy that you liked it. Thank you so much. stay tuned for more!

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Chinedu Dike 14 June 2019

An insightful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely brought forth in beautiful rhyme scheme with conviction. Very heartfelt. Thanks for sharing.

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Uswa Afzal 20 June 2019

Glad to know that you liked it. Stay tuned for more. Regards Uswa Afzal, The Scale Services

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Nosheen Irfan 14 June 2019

A thought-provoking poem. Touched. Thanks for creating social awareness through poetry.

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Uswa Afzal 20 June 2019

Thank you so much Nosheen. Stay tuned for more. Regards Uswa Afzal, the Scale Services

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