Our Children Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Our Children

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They are not only smart
But form very good start
Each puzzle is solved
And life's mystery is

What do they suggest?
When act as best
It is eagerness to know
And very fast attempt to grow

World moves fast
So the time races to last
Children try to cope
So in life never proves flop

Sharp and intelligent as they are
They stay in door but look at far
Stars and moon does not appeal
They want knowledge and that too real

We fail at each stage
We are down with age
Now subjects are vast and new
We watch child’s growth and view

I feel happy when they counter
With sold argument and offer
Their version with logic and fairness
Being ignorant, I bring smile on face

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 November 2013

Maricela Ramírez and JaiRam Tiwari like this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 November 2013

good use of words Racheal Champion22 minutes ago haha.. true and meaningful... nice job Comment +1 amazing

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 November 2013

K.J. Maarten22 minutes ago i have no place to say much Comment +1 children grow to fast and they go through many stages of life and we hold a special place in our heart for them.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 November 2013

Sharon Poss14 minutes ago I like the way the person wrote this poem from the different stages of life and how they explained the what we all go through and want to experience growing up........

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 November 2013

They are not only smart But form very good start

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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