Tuesday, September 22, 2015

'Our Dad' Comments

Rating: 5.0

OUR DAD

Can I take up just a minute of your time.
To take you back to when all was fine.
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Richard Scott Nicholson
Dad
COMMENTS
Chinedu Dike 11 October 2015

A beautiful tribute and memorial to a strong and doting dad. Indeed, he will always be seen in the crops that you yield, as you are all chips of the old bud. A well articulated piece of poetry insightfully penned with conviction. A lovely poem with good rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing Richard and do remain blessed. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Bayla Burnett 22 September 2015

beautiful message I really like it very sweet although I didn't have a dad this brought comfort to the memories I had with my grandfather! feel free to read and comment my poems

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Kelly Kurt 22 September 2015

A lovely, heart-touching poem, Richard. I know your dad heard and loved it. Thank you for sharing. Peace

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