Wednesday, November 17, 2004

Our Earthly Condition Comments

Rating: 3.5

It’s very odd to think we all
Live out our lives on a spinning ball
Along with creatures strange and various—
The situation sounds precarious!
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Pete Crowther
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Emma Johnson 06 March 2006

Witty. Your words enact the spinning motion of earth. I felt the motion.

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Julia Klimenova 23 February 2006

It's amazing to think what different strange creatures live on this planet. Your poem expresses your surprise at this world with its mysteries and your acceptance of it. A very nice poem. Julia

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Pia Andersson 03 March 2005

Excellent work! ! Is that all there is, we may ask ourselves...but that the only life we have got although its not a lot You remind me of a Swedish poet called Nils Ferlin As you might know I am a Swedish woman living in Stockholm...Well you have got an admirer with this poem Excellent! ! !

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Pete Crowther

Pete Crowther

Hull, East Yorkshire, England
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