Our Greatest Love Is Prison Poem by Ayla Tulip

Our Greatest Love Is Prison

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Out greatest love is prison.
We're so free when we're in chains:
Happy not to make decisions,
Happy to escape the change.

We are criminals for sure,
Stealing life from ourselves.
When we walk, we rush on tour
To escape the freedom bells.

What's a man, who's cutting ears,
Blinding eyes, while still asleep,
Not to see and not to hear,
Not to taste a single sip?

Stop the heart and burn on fire
Our very fingertips,
Not to feel the great desire
Burning somewhere on the lips.

Being so afraid to pilot,
Wrap ideas in a knot.
When we walk, we walk in twilight,
Hoping we can hide from God.

Tie ourselves to burning stakes,
We agree just with the pains;
Though the greatest of mistakes
Is devotion to the chains.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 06 October 2008

Profound...thanks for sharing 10

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Ency Bearis 23 September 2008

a great poem..well chained devotion...nice write...lovely.. Ency Bearis

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Jimi Doyle 23 September 2008

devotion to the chains is a heckuva good line

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