the two pillars
have stayed their two
distances
alas! our house
is strong as ever
thanks for the
song of the wind
let me be
grateful to your
deepening
silence
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I would like to translate this poem
I like your choice of line breakage between the first and third stanzas, you physically created the distance between the lines, which gave the concept you were portraying maximum effect. My name's Alex Roth, please read my poem Early-Jazz Mural and tell me what you think.