Our House Is Strong As Ever Poem by RIC BASTASA

Our House Is Strong As Ever

Rating: 4.5


the two pillars
have stayed their two
distances

alas! our house
is strong as ever


thanks for the
song of the wind

let me be
grateful to your
deepening
silence

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alex Roth 17 November 2012

I like your choice of line breakage between the first and third stanzas, you physically created the distance between the lines, which gave the concept you were portraying maximum effect. My name's Alex Roth, please read my poem Early-Jazz Mural and tell me what you think.

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