Our Life Poem by Prabhakr Anil

Our Life

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We always try to find the best,
So we do any work good to bad.
For peace we run to and fro without rest,
At last we receive only sad.
For joy we fall in love any way,
And we seek of our will.
After it we began to our passions, decay,
At last we lost our utmost skill.
If we want really peace,
We should faith in spiritual will.
We should leave this physical race,
This world is like a galloping field.
For any aim we follow this way,
Every one is the racer of this field.

Wednesday, September 20, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: motivational
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 21 September 2017

Such an interesting write.... a highest 10++++++

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 17 October 2018

beautiful young man you are a seed of poetry you must flourish ask friend s to water thee read some of my poetry like moms smiles and time now posted

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Siddartha Montik 26 September 2017

Good thoughts Nishad! ! Loved the Poem and the Stanza specialy We should faith in spiritual will. We should leave this physical race God bless you! ! 10+++!

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Ap Nishad 27 September 2017

Thank you......

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 September 2017

Very nice piece of work.. The lines..If we want really peace, We should faith in spiritual will..are fascinating! Beautiful! !

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Ap Nishad 27 September 2017

Thank you sir.....

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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 24 September 2017

Every one is the racer of this field.10++++++++

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Ap Nishad 24 September 2017

Thank you sir.

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Dr Antony Theodore 21 September 2017

For joy we fall in love any way, And we seek of our will. After it we began to our passions, decay, love is a universal theme. love and life. you are portraying it in your own great and unique way. thank you dear poet. tony

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Ap Nishad 21 September 2017

Thank you....

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