Sunday, October 26, 2008

***our Love*** Comments

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some people fight and break up
for others its as easy as breaking a tea cup.

u loved me and yet i am your lover
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negar shahnouri
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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 22 April 2009

ur are very lovely my friend.. u amazing! great poem! outstanding write!

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Ermia ermia 20 November 2008

, , , And some people love noone! Some people like you! ! ! ! ! !

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Ben Gieske 17 November 2008

Another thought provoking piece. Too young? One-sided love? It takes more than love? I like the inclusion of the “lets don’t forget ur dear wife ” But all the hmmm? ? ? ?

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Yasser Koor 27 October 2008

emmm dear poet full of grammatical mistakes.. but the message is clear. you have a big heart to love so don't care about him, your words told me that he hurts u, it isn't my business, but life is great so leave it, and find someone who really love u....and, , , smile and keep smiling :) Yasser by theway thanx for your comment

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