Tuesday, November 1, 2011

Our Promises Comments

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Standing on the border line
Of our hearts’ desires
We knew we’d never be together
We knew we’d never live forever.
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Prachi Agrawal
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Harindhar Reddy 10 November 2011

Holy moly, Holy-dooly! Ideas ran so close in the poem and left a wonderful mark on my heart. I think poetess is in reminiscent mood remember as childhood friend/sweetheart. It's an amazing one. I love these lines which show promise from a promising poet! Happy journey as poet! :) :) :) 'We knew we’d never be together We knew we’d never live forever.'

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