Our Shadow Poem by Rachel Sims

Our Shadow

Rating: 5.0


I don't believe in coincidence
Even less when multiplied
I believe in design,
Strings and reactors
And the wings of butterflies
I believe in their effect
And the energy we create
I believe that intuition
Is a catalyst for fate

I suspect strangers are mirrors
For those who won't look inside
Casting their shadow onto others
A consequence of too much pride
I think when these wings flutter
They can provoke a storm
Seeding clouds that hang above them
Reaping what was sworn

I gather convolution
masks the sound
Of the still waters' ripple
When stones are cast down
Hurled from glass temples
that would crumble
If met with their own
I sense this cause and affect
Is disingenuously unknown

Our Shadow
Saturday, April 20, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: believe,wings
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 22 May 2024

Most deserving poem chosen by Poem Hunter and Team as The Member Poem Of The Day! Ful Marks 5 stars

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An ingenious poem. When you say " I believe in design" you say a lot and leave more unsaid. Loved it. Top score. And congratulations. This poem is recognised as the Poem Of The Day.

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