Out For Duck Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Out For Duck

Rating: 5.0


If player is out for duck
His chances are struck
He is not chosen as player again
He has to sit in pavilion

If his innings are shrouded
By getting duck again, he is not sounded
If he is out for duck third times
His ability as player is questioned this time

The same is for poets too
He must find consistency and support
It is not important who read or who did not
But big zero definitely invites attention to be caught

If it is only symbolic posting as routine
One can understand and feel fine
When it goes on increasing
Your position as poet is ceasing

The soul revolts like river
It finds water to divert its path
To flow through fertile routes and enjoy
It gives her much time with joy

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sherri Coulter 24 May 2014

Player is out for health, of the young, not future health scare with minimal care. Blunt-ly spoken by this tokin.

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Needs Revision Anwuar Abdalah36 minutes ago I enjoyed it but I felt that some of the wording was awkward at some points and completely distracted the flow of the poem. For this reason I give 3 stars, but in general it is fairly good- as well as its message. :)

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If player is out for duck His chances are struck

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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