Out Of Body Poem by Ordinary May

Out Of Body

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Last night I slipped into an introspective dream
a witness of a strange extracorporeal experience
the whole me deconstructed to its raw materials
Dead myself was found a bright day
and lay nude on a table counter
on a top floor balcony of an unknown city

I was there, the eyes of a stranger
contemplating my naked body
my appealing erogenous zones
arms and legs leaning on the sides
motionless ribs and chest protruding
my eyelids shut in serenity, the wooden expression

So detached from the soulless body
at first, I couldn't clearly recognize
the element that linked me to the dream
Insignificant who owned the corps before
lands of a new perspective are here for me to explore
small part of the primal knowledge revealed to me

Mystified by compassion and moral obligation
for the helpless body does not deserve
unprotected to lie under the opal rays of the city sun
uncovered to repose in the cold night winds
exposed to random spectators' judgment
abandoned, without a soul. Was I the owner of that body?

Rushing in agony and the countdown of time
Was I there to save my body from unworthy decay?
Do I have the power to drag it inside the room?
it was a drastic solution as I looked around
there onwards, undisturbed, I would organize the next step
the certainty of predestination supported by aloof composure

Helping hands' astounding substance
crystal liquid energy in transparent gloves instead of skin
repeated attempts to lift up my lifeless body
oh I was extremely heavy, impossible to move
an overrated effort in an eerie cloud of panic and the gravity
a deafening whack then awkward pulls dragging me on the floor

There I woke up, as one.

Out Of Body
Saturday, February 13, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: body,human brain,dream,dream time,experience,metaphysical,soul,free mind,freedom
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 13 February 2021

This poem is certainly going to my favorite list. Absolutely amazing

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Savita Tyagi 13 February 2021

A strange dream indeed with marvelous expressions! Some dreams are so fascinating!

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