Saturday, May 20, 2006

Out Of One's Depth Comments

Rating: 5.0

The mealy-mouths and evil-eyes,
they stranded in the vast void.
Mr. Romeos & Miss.Juliettes
don't let go your secret whispers.
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nimal dunuhinga
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Nick Percowycz 20 May 2006

Only Nimal can illustrate such a situation with such clarity and grace! Boundries are put on all of us. God bless the poet! A ten.

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Sandra Fowler 20 May 2006

A very bold and challenging poem.There is danger in being out of one's depth for sure. Kindest regards, Sandra

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