Out Of One's Depth Poem by nimal dunuhinga

Out Of One's Depth

Rating: 5.0


The mealy-mouths and evil-eyes,
they stranded in the vast void.
Mr. Romeos & Miss.Juliettes
don't let go your secret whispers.
They do blackmail for your separation.
Be alert! on your swinging bridge.
The relative depth you see in the river
is not true my brother
and it's a bottomless dear!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nick Percowycz 20 May 2006

Only Nimal can illustrate such a situation with such clarity and grace! Boundries are put on all of us. God bless the poet! A ten.

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Sandra Fowler 20 May 2006

A very bold and challenging poem.There is danger in being out of one's depth for sure. Kindest regards, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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