Out Of The Depth Poem by Mark louie Cañete

Out Of The Depth

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I should go out from my shell
To see the rising sun that blends
It's rays are blazing in my skin
Its hotness energize my being

look above and see its beauty
have you ever wonder its mystery?
Its vagueness have you not been in query?
Now feel this experience pleasantly

But be sure craziness will be away
Or else you will be in milky way
Distance from Him doesn't seem okay
Totally destructive, so miserably

Remember you are part of His flock
Be faithful and look for life forward
Learn from that orbit of life
Holding it as gift so delight

Look for yourself, be like thee
And be out of your shell your hide out shame
So that you will not lose the game
A life parted that will never be the same.

Thursday, November 4, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gillena Cox 26 January 2012

you sing an ode of self worth here, truly a lovely poem

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tandi toxins 19 November 2010

i really like all your poems they are all verry insightfull plz keep writing

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