Out Of Tune Poem by Richard Jarboe

Out Of Tune

Rating: 5.0


The singer was sexy,
But singing out of tune,
And with the drummer pounding a funeral beat,
I had to get out of there soon.

Most thinking was muddled,
With symbols clanging out of time,
After a while, you could get befuddled,
One octave low and lyrics backward in rhyme.

If you're one octave low and going backwards as a result,
You've got to face it; this song is everybody's fault.

Thursday, April 11, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: singing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 April 2019

A fascinating poem.well written. Very entertaining. The first stanza resonates with me. I have to get out of the room too.

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