Overwhelming, The Darkness. Poem by Hari Prasad

Overwhelming, The Darkness.

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What is never seen,
has never been.

Hey Darkness! You are but,
a lack of spark.

so, who is overwhelming you tonight,
the stars or the moonlight.

Overwhelming, The Darkness.
Thursday, February 2, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: darkness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Nice one, nice to read, but please try express more.thank you

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Kim Barney 02 February 2017

Short but full of feeling. This seems to be the first poem that you have posted to this website. Welcome to Poem Hunter!

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Hari Prasad 27 February 2017

Thank you for encouraging words chinedu dike.

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Hari Prasad 27 February 2017

Thank you for encouraging words chinese dike.

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Chinedu Dike 27 February 2017

An insightful train of thought nicely encapsulated in good rhyme scheme with conviction. Thanks for sharing Hari.

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Hari Prasad 03 February 2017

Thanks vaidyanathan. In this poem I wanted to undermine the Overwhelming darkness (ignorance) by saying it lasts until we ignite some light (knowledge), even faintest one will help. - Hari

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Hari Prasad 03 February 2017

Thanks Kim. Yes it is my first one here. Hari

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