Tuesday, April 5, 2005

Pacify (12-28-04) Comments

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The blood flows down our writsts
and your minty kisses
pacify me
I can see your face all through the night
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Kayla Jarnac
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Jodi Right 05 April 2005

Wow! that was gripping and just blew me away. That was suicide put to a all new level! you made it so subtle but with so much power! The way you poetry flows and structures is very good! A all round spectatcular poem LOve Jodixxx

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