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My heart eager for things unknown
Unknown but wanted but needed



Sigh not for there is hope
Doubt not because it is there

Seven Whispers pass me by.
Unknowing, unrevealing,
The secret, which lies in the whisper of the mind.
The mind is imaginary, full of trickery and magical places

Be there

Take my body
And hold me dear for I shall fall

Behind the secure locked doors
Behind the thick steeled windows
Behind the high enclosed fences
Stood a girl- lost



Bounded to you by love
Separated from you by life

I see you there standing alone
So lonely, so broken
Hollow inside you search
Search for a guide

Over land I pass and go
Over water I sink and leave

I lie awake each night
Staring at the ceiling
Following each crack
Finding new routes

Sea sweeps in shades of blue
Grass sways in shades of green
Each colour a delicate purpose
A purpose in which nature

As I watch you dance and play, you say
“Mummy, will I be a dancer? ”
And I say..
“Darling, with your little feet,

Down by the seaside
I watch as wave by wave

Temptation Awaits

Nowhere to breathe

Take me away
Far way
Away from water or land
Away from stars or planets

One taken chance, one fallen rage
We shared an eternity we fought in solemnity
Cannot face the truth, cannot hide the feeling
Of that hidden passion, boiling lust, building envy

You ugly git, you stupid girl
Why you lookin at me?
What’s with ya starin at me?
An’t you had enough

The past is a locked realm,
A secret burden the mind cages,
Trapped behind tears of regret,
Our mind holds the key;

You’ve been my friend for many years
My heart and yours connected
So willingly, so lovingly you gave in
Your hearts eager for love, for my love

Each day I think about you
As we come together as two
You were missing the other
Until I became your lover

Deep Under the Surface,

jodi right Biography

i am 17, i begun my poetry only last year and love writing it. Its just a way to show you feelings in a different aspect and letting other people to be inspired by your writing and be able to relate it to their life. My first poem was Seven Whispers and i think i have learnt from that poem to explore more into poetry and write in different ways my favourite poem is Truth because it is personal to me only written recently inspiration mostly come from the band Good Charlotte for most my poems.)

The Best Poem Of jodi right

Desperation For Love

My heart eager for things unknown
Unknown but wanted but needed
Needed, since it is my heart that aches
Aches for the sweetest touch of your hands
Hands exploring my body, clasping my heart
Heart lies open, so vulnerable but uncaring
Uncaring yet guarded, yet persistent
Persistent but hesitant and scared
Scared for it may be hurt
Hurt haunting my dreams, spoiling my pleasure
Pleasure in which I seek
Seek I do but unsuccessfully
Unsuccessfully is my life
Life without love
Love is all I want
Want but cannot have

Give me a chance, a chance to
Cool the fires of lust and awaken passion
Passion so endearing it leaves me breathless
Breathless so I cannot embrace a single breath
Bury deep into the soul, let our bodies entwine
Entwine we will, with the constant melody
Melody of singing birds sharing praise
Praise of womanhood, Praise of bravery
Bravery will lead us through barriers
Barriers that cover us with thick strife
Strife will attempt to harm no more
No more it can for I shall love
Love so beautiful the world will crumble
Crumble with powerful delight
Delight which will bring us to our finish

jodi right Comments

Drew Chadwick 30 March 2005

You are utterly amazing and inspirational. Fantastic, deep work. Well done.

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Andrew Konisberg 27 May 2005

keep at it, Jodi. you are extremely talented. I could only just about string sentences together at your are writing things that are 'up there' with some of the best poets on this site. I am only an average poet myself, but I know ability when I read it. Keep going!

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long gone 08 April 2005

you, quite simply, are one of the most gifted writers on the entire site. I am stunned at how effortless your verse appears. and...your best is yet to come.

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Lamont Haywood 31 March 2005

You are a sensitive and talented poet. Your work is brilliant! You are capable of writing the way most of us wish we could write and yet to be so young...It is only in age however because your heart is very mature and wise. You make me believe again.

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Bkhj Chen 31 March 2005

you are a goddess in poetry. i look forward to seeing your published poetry books in the future.

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Emily Nunchuck 31 March 2005

The first person I've read on here with an age so close to mine, as well as a talent far beyond her age. You're most definately one of the best poets of our age I've read, and it's nice to relate to poems as I do with yours.

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