Pain Poem by Jess

Pain

Rating: 5.0


Shes smiling on the outside
Doesn't want anyone to know
The pain she is really feeling
Cause on the inside she is dying
If you look hard into her broken eyes
You will see
She is really crying
But her tears have all dried up
She has been crying way too much
Her heart has been broken
And it just won't mend
She wants to cut
Right down to the vein
Kill herself
To get rid of the pain
She looks into the mirror
And wonders who she is
Shes lost herslef
In all this pain
Why can't it just go away?
So she can be herself again

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Loveless Marie 15 January 2009

this is absoutly my favorite poem

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Crystal F 23 September 2006

I really like this poem it reminds me of my mother.My mother really does not think about me and does not care abot me i guess.Also i really don't show how i feel about this i just smile and think everything is k but is is not. Well u did a good job writing this poem i like it keep up the good work! ! !

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