Make A Wish

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^~(Pain) ~^ - Poem by Make A Wish

It Hurts
I'm Hurt
All Because Of You

You Did it
You went with her
When u said
You would stay with me

The Pain is unbearable
Almost Deathening
One look at you
And I feel like shooting you

Why? I ask
Why did you lie?
No one is honest anymore
So dont trust anyone

Comments about ^~(Pain) ~^ by Make A Wish

  • (3/26/2008 9:49:00 AM)

    Steph B

    Good write, seems the experience is shared by others as well.
    Thanks for reading mine, and the comment is appreciated.

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  • (2/1/2008 10:58:00 AM)

    Dark, interesting, worth the read. (Report)Reply

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  • (12/5/2007 10:51:00 PM)

    wow... that is how i felt towards my seriously dont shoot anyone. its really his lost. there are people in this world that you can trust, your friends and etc. take care. the pain will go, only time will heal a broken heart. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 5, 2007

Poem Edited: Thursday, April 28, 2011

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