Pain And Struggle Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Pain And Struggle



Oh yes, I admit openly
That I love you really
From heart and mind
As you were very kind

You were one of the best
Compared to the rest
You never showed disregard
That was good to move forward

You were simple and sober
That was sought after
I was after it since long
You have prove it right and me a wrong

What do we desire after all?
Worldly attachment for honest call
Live together and spend the time
That only helps all the time

Big things are said in general
They need simple dismissal
We need to be straight and simple
As life must invite no more troubles

It should not be laden with worries
So it proves burden to carry
Pain and struggle is different part
We are all here for very good start

Monday, October 27, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 October 2014

Oh yes, I admit openly That I love you really

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 October 2014

passionate Leila McLeod8 hours ago this is my favorite of your poems that i've read so far...great piece ;) Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 October 2014

passionate Leila McLeod8 hours ago this is my favorite of your poems that i've read so far...great piece ;) Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 October 2014

passionate Leila McLeod8 hours ago this is my favorite of your poems that i've read so far...great piece ;) Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 October 2014

I like it the thoughts are grant. stan brierly8 hours ago Well written from the heart Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 October 2014

i like it Mbalentle Ganca8 hours ago woow its nice well structured

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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