Mister LPTD

Painful Parts - Poem by Mister LPTD

the most painful part about losing your heart,
Is not your silence but that was the start.

the most painful part without you by my side,
is not your absence, but that weakened my pride.

the most painful part about loving you still,
is not my expenditure, nor absence of will.

The most painful part about you being inlove,
is not the fact, it's not me you think of.

the most painful part, the worst of them all,
is not missing your company, nor no recieving a call.

but reliving our story, thats played again and again,
having all of this love and knowing he's your 'best friend'.

Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship

Comments about Painful Parts by Mister LPTD

  • Kelly Kurt (12/2/2015 2:54:00 PM)

    The loss of love manifests multiple thoughts and feelings. Thanks, LPTD (Report) Reply

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  • (12/2/2015 8:28:00 AM)

    this reads out beautifully! well done, a truly fabulous poem :) (Report) Reply

  • Shakil Ahmed (12/2/2015 8:15:00 AM)

    you have painted your feelings very well in the poem, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, December 2, 2015

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