Panaromic Life! ! Poem by zoya rasul

Panaromic Life! !

Rating: 4.6


A sabulous stroll down the memory lane;
On the variegated chariot of delight.
Amidst the rocky narrow streets of pain;
sometimes to the exquisite ecstatic height...


Where some effulgent moment continue to shine on...
With some cimmerian nights eclipsing the sheen f joy.
And ailing agonies dashing to the island f grief..
And pleasures weaving an illuionary decoy...



Rejuvinating the past with the essence f remembrances;
And living in that few moments the span f years.
There lies a dry crumpled rose still full f fragrances;
Chanting softly the saga f some unshrinkable distances....



Coming back to present with some tears & smiles;
With your love shining bright, can walk an extra mile.
Not the candid hours: memorable moments r worth while;
They are what make us whole, no matter if they are volatile......


The longing to relive some moments intense! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
The desire to embrace the warmth of words unsaid...
With hope that sunny days will be back again.......
Compensating with love n care for my embroiled pains.......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 14 January 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Zoya. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Bhavdeep Singh 27 June 2009

The thing that makes u go sublime is a piece of art.. it does that. I can look a heart of a youth lying or lost in the woblation of words.. though situation of daydreaming or rapture of a peace full death is éclat but the pain of killing ur self, lost in words is a blessing intact. A writer who is still into womb of poetry!

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Vivek Singh 13 April 2009

i really admire ur english and emotions too may u get wat u wish

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words woven beautifully, reflecting intense love even during pain......hope ur lover and u gt bq togetha as soon as possibl

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Mylah Bagaipo 03 December 2008

I've just read your poem and its really great..... wow i really admire your English (i'm not that good like you when it comes in English) ..hehehe keep on writing... go go go...

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