Thursday, June 25, 2015

Panels for the Walls Comments

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Leave the long fall between us (peak after peak)
Here were my paints and there were my powders
And then I was drunk and we lost each other
My shadow tumbled after
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Akachukwu Lekwauwa 26 June 2015

Very good one. The ending painted a bright future. Please review my poem 'Calculus Of A Life Time'

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Kelly Kurt 25 June 2015

A lovely piece, Cedar Thank you for sharing with us Peace

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