Saturday, December 26, 2015

Papa I Saw Her Again Comments

Rating: 5.0

I saw that beautiful girl I told you
about,
The one I had used and dumped
without remorse,
...
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Chef Sanzy Muna
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Aarzoo Mehek 26 December 2015

Beautifully written and love the way the father elaborated the value of woman. Right direction to disruptive thoughts bears fruits of love. My compliments.

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Manonton Dalan 26 December 2015

klap klap klap klap bravo... that's really true

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Ratnakar Mandlik 26 December 2015

Wonderful mixture of a poem and a masque narrating the troubled thoughts in a soliloquy form. Enjoyed the repentance part of the son and glorification of women in general by Papa in reply to queries. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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