Paper Boat Tanka Poem by Chen-ou Liu

Version I:

a paper boat
made from early drafts
of my poem
sails down the river...
moonlit memories


version II:

a paper boat
made from early drafts
of my poem
sails down the river
of moonlit memories


Version III:

a paper boat
made from early drafts
of my poem
sails down the river...
of moonlit memories


note: there are three different river images portrayed in these versions due to their structural differences