Paradigm- 1 Poem by Pallab Chaudhury

Paradigm- 1

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The smoke at the public place
Uncoils to mix with the smog of the reserved forest.

The current scene on the TV
At the entrance lobe is to depict the clean earth.

Cheat or be cheated-
The business motto can hardly avoid this.
If the fine being paid off
Then, what does pollution mean!

The ceased trunks of wood on the open yard
Undergoes a massive decay; the wind seems careless.

The loaded truck with logs finishes its risky trip
Following same the-then bypass.


(Dated: 06-10-2017) .

Saturday, October 7, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: environment
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 07 October 2017

'A sparrow couple copulates; the wind seems careless'. All observed and said by the poet does not give as exact and objective assessment of the situation as the line appearing at the head of these comments.

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Pallab Chaudhury 08 October 2017

Based on your observation, there is a change in the poem. Thank you very much for your valuable comments.

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