As You Have Come Poem by Pallab Chaudhury

As You Have Come

Rating: 4.8


As you have come,
Birds sing in my mind
Creepers blossom
With numerous smells unknown….

As you have come,
The step-stones of river submerse.
The songs of water
Turn into laughter....

As you have come,
The pen awakes up from hibernation.
Letters on the manuscript
Look with wanton eyes...


Dated: 11-10-2017.

Wednesday, October 11, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 22 November 2017

As you have come, /Birds sing in my mind/Creepers blossom/With numerous smells unknown...A wonderful poem is selected as the poem of the day! Many congratulations dear poet! !

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Pallab Chaudhury 22 November 2017

Your words deeply moved me. I'm also pleased to see that you reacted so positively. Thanking you.

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Tom Allport 22 November 2017

a poem of one's transformation which in turn gives another the inspiration to write? ............well written Pallab.

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Pallab Chaudhury 22 November 2017

Deeply moved by your kind words. I'm pleased too, to see that you have reacted so positively. Thanking you, very much.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 22 November 2017

Congratulation dear Pallab to have the position you deserved since long, Happy to see such a lovely poem of yours being picked. A great inspiring poem itself. Regards. Subhas

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"AAP Aaye, bahaar aaye"… beautiful poem…

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 08 January 2022

Marvellous poem that deserves top stars. Wishing you a great year ahead. Thank you too, for all your lovely comments on my poems.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 08 January 2022

As the birds sing, as the creepers blossom, as the water turns into laughter- love blooms so sweetly.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 08 January 2022

Dear Pallab, this is a wonderful poem that is a coming, an awakening of a serene love that so beautifully merges with the divine blessings of nature.

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How elegantly is the poet welcoming the arrival of his sweet heart

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