As You Have Come Poem by Pallab Chaudhury

As You Have Come

Rating: 4.8


As you have come,
Birds sing in my mind
Creepers blossom
With numerous smells unknown….

As you have come,
The step-stones of river submerse.
The songs of water
Turn into laughter....

As you have come,
The pen awakes up from hibernation.
Letters on the manuscript
Look with wanton eyes...


Dated: 11-10-2017.

Wednesday, October 11, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 22 November 2017

As you have come, /Birds sing in my mind/Creepers blossom/With numerous smells unknown...A wonderful poem is selected as the poem of the day! Many congratulations dear poet! !

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Pallab Chaudhury 22 November 2017

Your words deeply moved me. I'm also pleased to see that you reacted so positively. Thanking you.

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John Paul 22 November 2017

As you have come a lot of things happened, great romantic and interesting, congratulation and thanks

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Pallab Chaudhury 22 November 2017

Welcome, to this e-page! You have inspired me by your words..... Thanking you a lot, Mr. John Paul, for your kind visit to the e-page.

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Paul Brookes 22 November 2017

An interesting write

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PREMKUMAR C N 08 December 2022

As you have come, The pen awakes up from hibernation. Superb imagery. Beautiful poem.

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Beautiful. Verses of strong emotion.Wish you all the best

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"AAP Aaye, bahaar aaye"… beautiful poem…

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 08 January 2022

Marvellous poem that deserves top stars. Wishing you a great year ahead. Thank you too, for all your lovely comments on my poems.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 08 January 2022

As the birds sing, as the creepers blossom, as the water turns into laughter- love blooms so sweetly.

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