Particle God Poem by Pallab Chaudhury

Particle God

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As is the God so is the offerings…
I haven't even thought of him and didn't offer any tribute too …
Even then, with a single call
All the years-old garbage of the town
Has been cleared off…

You are there in the good will of common people
And show us a clean sky and a glorious dawn.

Oh, Dear! Who made you to swim in this mighty ocean?

I've noted you in my digital note-pad
In golden letters- Particle God

And know that I'll get you on-call;
No need to have a cell number
Or a missed-call …

(Dated: 01-08-2018)

Wednesday, August 1, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 13 August 2018

You are there in the good will of common people. You show us a clean sky and a glorious dawn..........Impressive expression with nice theme. God is on above and he shows us glorious dawn for betterment of lives, he has love for us ever. Though it is a poem of love and life yet it is spiritual. A beautiful poem nicely executed.

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Pallab Chaudhury 14 August 2018

Thank you for the analytical comments that you have forwarded here in this e-page. With regards.

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Savita Tyagi 01 August 2018

Beautiful. We don’t need to know to whom we should be thankful. It is enough to know we have a lot to be thankful for.

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Pallab Chaudhury 01 August 2018

Nice to receive your insightful comments. Thanking you. With best regards.

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