Sunday, November 30, 2008

Paradise Comments

Rating: 5.0

Think you landed on the terrain of merciful palace;
Why the mercy? It does not bother
The least gratified motion of mortal traits.
Imagine, you distanced your world
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Moushumi moushumi
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Joseph Poewhit 07 March 2009

That is a very very deep poem. You could meditate on it for a long long time.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 03 December 2008

The mute is talkin.........but if you can get those meanings........the Paradise will not be the same anymore! ! ! ! .Great writes MOusumi.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 02 December 2008

The least gratified motion of mortal traits. Imagine, you distanced your world.....................wonderful expression introspective from within as illustrated upon bounding by time and space, superbly wrought by imagery and metaphor blending with matrices of life,10+++, thanks for sharing

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