Part From You Poem by sarah frank

Part From You

Rating: 5.0


These are ever lasting memeories
you left me when i was in love
Years goes by and i can't talk about it
Im lost in this pitty world

This smile hides my tears
I wonder why i say good night
Please don't forget about me
Close your eyes and pray for me

Please don't say good bye
A part from you
is a broken heart with out its locket

Whole glasses becomes
Shattered glasses with no sound
puzzels peices are spread out

My heart stops, Lips turn blue
and then I fall in the dark

A part from you is a life
that once counted on for
If you love me?
why leave me?
I'm done on this fate you placed

A part is a part
that i will never forget...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I know how hard it is to forget, how impossible it is, and even how we don't want to forget. I have a fear of forgetting. I love how you describe the memories. They really seem more like scars that won't disappear on you. Very deep.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 25 November 2009

Emotion expressed very well... Keep writing. Best Wishes Naseer

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James Mclain 25 November 2009

the heart was meant.. for more than just too pump blood... the heart must also carry the and some times this also.. as well as your other...iip

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