Thursday, March 2, 2006

Passages Comments

Rating: 4.8

Let's just close the door and see what lies a head,
Is there a passage, that is dark and dreary,
one that makes your mind wander
and your thoughts become eerie
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sylvia spencer
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Gary Bryson 09 March 2006

I enjoyed this poem. I can close my eyes and picture all the journies I never took. Gary

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Sandra Fowler 03 March 2006

A very inspiring poem, Sylvia. Imagination could do no more. Warm regards, Sandra

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Scarlett Treat 02 March 2006

The doorway of endless possibilities - you make it sound like endless possibilities that are so tempting, with overtones of 'The Road Not Taken.' Nice one! Scarlett

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Duncan Wyllie 02 March 2006

Sorry Sylvia I click on 9 instead of Ten, but meant ten.Love Duncan

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Duncan Wyllie 02 March 2006

I was taken off into a dream state in this one.Mesmerising.Love Duncan

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