Passenger Poem by Faith Wood

Passenger



I stood waiting for you in the rear parking lot
Turns out you drove off without me
And I hear your picked up a passenger on your way
to keep your mind from drifting

You said, 'It doesn't mean a thing
She doesn't mean a thing'
Why are you whispering?
You said, 'It happened by chance
This is not my chance'
But why are you lying?

I sat down in a secluded part of the courtyard
I was hoping that maybe you'd come to find me
I had envisioned you looking under bridges
and on top of sky scrapers, but I was only wishing

No matter how strong I am
I cannot will myself to believe you again

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ivan Donn Carswell 09 February 2007

Faith, you have partitioned off what you know to be true and what you want to be true - then you claim to be strong enough to believe what you want. I know what you mean, but are you? This is a fabulously complex poem stated with minimal form and superbly simple word choice. Great work. Rgds, Ivan

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