Friday, February 24, 2012

Past Life Comments

Rating: 4.8

A time shifting click
In the mind
Takes you back
To when you first died
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Dave Alan Walker
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Apphia Grimonia 16 March 2012

i really felt something after reading your poem but i can't describe what it is..what i'm sure is..i like your poem..

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Lawrence H 07 March 2012

Reincarnation of past life in Buddhism belief. We bear our karma into the next life for all our wrong doing.. Re-awakening of new lease of life..

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Shadow Girl 25 February 2012

Nice thoughts...or not! ! ! depending on which way u look at it....interesting write...short but full of thought..like it. -SG

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Eric Cockrell 24 February 2012

makes one wonder how many times... in my case quite a few (slow learner) ... good poem!

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Jay Alexander 24 February 2012

Hi Dave I'm new to this site so it was very nice to receive your comment. I like your poem, it reminds me of Zen, dying and being reborn. Good stuff.

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Dave Alan Walker

Dave Alan Walker

Pudsey, Leeds
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