Monday, July 4, 2011

' Peace, Under God ' Comments

Rating: 3.0

Let every God fearing nation's flag furl
Representing freedom, a valued pearl
Paid for at the expense of battles fought
Peace, under God, be what is wrought.
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Carmela Patterson
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 04 July 2011

Wonderful poem written with great skill. The poem is rich in imagery and style. I am impressed. Well taken. I rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal

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