Saturday, September 17, 2016

Peaceful Battle-Field Comments

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Battle-field is crowded and noisy, vivid
Direct killing, secret murder,
Espionage of wind
Noon; poor sun is swallowed by deep dark cloud
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SRIRANJI ARATISANKAR
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B.m. Biswas 17 September 2016

fine...not the war...but your poems the words selected (diction) is fitful to make the sound of a real battle field.....

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