Friday, July 28, 2017

Peaceful Feeling Comments

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The sky is blue and the grass is green
Peace, love, and joy all surround me
Calming waters and falling leaves
Make for a peaceful feeling
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Dawn Keller
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Jeanette Telusma 28 July 2017

Perfect title for this poem.... a wonderful write. Thank you! !

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Dawn Keller 31 July 2017

Thank You! ! I am glad you enjoy it. I am trying to develop my writing. I am working on trying to rhyme a bit more and just find myself.

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Lamar Cole 28 July 2017

Very nice poem about peaceful feeling with great imagery.

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Dawn Keller 28 July 2017

Thank You

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