Peppermint Poem by Sam Preve

Peppermint

Rating: 5.0


Unwrapping the clear wrapper
Sliding the striped red stripped oval
Between teeth, tonguing it
Softly and slowly at first,
Then quickening the pace
Of continual strokes in,
Next, up and back into mouth,
Just scrapping the roof a little.
Sighs as it is rubbed into excitement.
Standing tall lifting away from the skin it
Once laid limp by,
Head grows aware as white clears,
Sudden rapture, you exhale,
Refreshingly cool breath.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjali Sinha 21 January 2010

wowwwwwww i felt coooooooooollllllllllllllll lovely write -10

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Gutter Box 08 January 2010

Haha very nice poem Sam..You had my full attention the whole time I was reading this. Great job..keep writing..You are very descriptive. ~T! &R&

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