Perfect World A Fantasy Poem by Marles Sonakaid

Perfect World A Fantasy

Rating: 5.0


We can make this world a better place.
All we need is some effort, not being a proud maverick but a proud human being that’ll offer to help this world become a better place.
Not caring about race, beliefs, or personalities but acknowledging everyone’s existence and expressing love to people of your own kind.

Must we meet another superior and intellect being to actually form a bond with another?
Do we have to have someone to compete for us to come together?

Fantasies and movies have manipulated the human mind into thinking we can do it ourselves, and be a hero, but that’s not true.
We have to work together in order to succeed. If we just respect everyone for who they are the world will flow a little bit easier.

However, this is a fantasy itself...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Loyd C Taylor Sr 25 April 2008

Hello Marles, and I agree 100%. Good read. Have you read my poem 'I Dream'? Sinilar to your. Have a good one, , , , : LC

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 25 March 2008

i agreed with you all the way..............we need to respect each other's back..........

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