Thursday, May 14, 2009

Perfection? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Why should I want to be perfect?
There are too many trying to be that.
And those 'acts' are commonly observed.
With proper etiquette intact!
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Ashraful Musaddeq 14 May 2009

Core idea is expressed in the first two lines. Nice poem,10 with pleasure.

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